Glorious Escapism Roleplay

The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:35 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I was going to try to do the kind of narrations Kyon does. Thats why I asked if it was confusing or not.

I mean it made sense to me but I wrote it.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:37 pm Post subject:

If that's the case, you should say "asked I" instead of "asked Mikael" and such. His name should only really appear when said by the other characters.

Other than that, it's more or less fine.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:38 pm Post subject:

Alright, noted, will do that
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:39 pm Post subject:

Cool.
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Aevalla

The mutant 0408 · Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 6:28 pm Post subject:

Hey! Nice to meet you!
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Aevalla · Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 6:54 pm Post subject: