Glorious Escapism Roleplay

The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:25 am Post subject: From the wasteland he crawls...

I'm The mutant 0408 and this is actually the first time I've ever done anything like this so I hope we get along!
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:30 am Post subject:

Heh. it's good to see a formal introduction from you.

I hope you continue to enjoy your time here.
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Toutaku · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 3:55 pm Post subject:

Välkommen!
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"Victims, aren't we all?"

The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:55 pm Post subject:

Thanks. Yeah I decided it was time to formally introduce myself to the forum being as I've decided to stay =).

Anyway to continue with my introduction I've been writing fanfiction for about three years and have moved on to writing my own stories. I'm thinking of starting something big and im looking forward to the input I'll receive from you all
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 8:21 pm Post subject:

Awesome. I'd be pleased to help.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:13 pm Post subject:

cool I'll probably pull together the main ideas on that 11 hour car trip to NC

Should I post that stuff in Original Fics?
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:16 pm Post subject:

Cool.

Yeah.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:24 pm Post subject:

Alright! The working title should be Quest. It is subject to change when i see how it unfolds. But look forward to seeing a quest topic out there. It should contain major details some charectors and maybe the first page or so.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:27 pm Post subject:

Alright. I look forward to it.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:40 pm Post subject:

I have just one question I was thinking about doing it from a first person kinda narrative. But there is so much more you can do writing in the 3rd person omniscient.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:44 pm Post subject:

That's up to you. First person can be compelling, but omniscient definitely has it's appeal too.

I say try writing in both and go with whatever feels more natural for the story.

I write mostly in third person limited, personally.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:02 pm Post subject:

Thats where you know every thing there is to know about one person right? Thats probably where I'm headed after i start wrighting.

I'm probably gooing to go with something like this;

Prince Gavin sat there on his majestic white horse. It seemed like he was glowing as if no dirt could touch him, no dirt dared to touch him. "Mikael." Prince Gavin was undisputedly the most dangerous man in the kingdom. He has slain countless monsters "Mikael." and is captain of the guard (will have a name). All the women swoon over him including my precious H "MIKAEL!"

"Yes Prince Gavin?" asked Mikael. "Are you going to sit there staring or are you going to help me capture this damn cat?"

The cat in question was a giant tiger from the Wunder Lands named Fluffy. At over 50 feet tall I wouldn't exactly call it a cat.

"Did you bring any cat nip sir?" Mikael asked sarcasticly "Good one Mikael!" Roared Gavin as he charged Fluffy on his white steed.

Something like that, Is that writing style too weird, cause I can make it more uniform.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:23 pm Post subject:

Looks to me like pretty normal first person. Nothing wrong with that.
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The mutant 0408 · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:45 pm Post subject:

Then i think I'm going with that.

Prince Gavin and Mikeal will probably be main charectors but I don't know if the giant Wunder Land tiger will remain
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 11:14 pm Post subject:

Heh. I see.

Wait. Reading it again, I'm a little confused. Is Mikael the person telling the story?
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