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Toutaku Overlord
Joined: 29 Jun 2010 Posts: 9245 Location: Subreality
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:25 pm Post subject: Splattered with your Gratitude |
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The disgusting yet awesome song I wrote. Enjoy!
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Streams of bloody crimson gather on my hands.
If you think I'm just poetic, let me help you understand.
I admit that I'm a sadist. I might even be mad.
I'd plough through your viscera and I doubt I'd feel bad.
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I'm wrist-deep in your chest. (Do you like it?) There'll be nothing to exhume.
I'll recreate my fantasies with your open wounds.
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They told me love would hurt and they warned me of the pain.
I took it rather literally, it's like a fucking game!
I'll strap you to a table. Scare you half to death.
My merits as a surgeon will be sure to take your breath.(away)-
Hygienic, Sterile scalpels? I hardly see the point.
I doubt there'll be much difference while I mutilate your joints.
Eating through the tissues. Sawing through your bones.
The sounds of my excitement will surely drown your moans.
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I'm wrist-deep in your chest. (I hope you like it.) There'll be nothing to exhume.
I'll recreate my fantasies with your open wounds.
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Vivisection, amputation, experiments galore.
I don't use anaesthesia and never have before.
I'll gut you and I'll cut you, make you feast on your own flesh.
Until I just get bored and throw you out like all the rest.
But first, a little gift before we go our merry ways.
Something to keep your next of kin traumatised for days.
You'll find I'm not traditional with vaginal exams.
Whirring, blunt machinery instead of careful hands.
I'm splattered with your gratitude, I've never had such fun.
You've not quite yet stopped moving, so the second round's begun.
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I'm wrist-deep in your chest. (You'll fucking like it!) There'll be nothing to exhume.
I'll recreate my fantasies with your open wounds.
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No time for any stitching, I'm nearly out of gauze.
You're brutally dissected for the Doctor's noble cause.
So now I flip you over, it's time to end the game.
Forced exsanguination with a rusty sawing chain.
I'm Splattered with your Gratitude. Your eyes are cold and dead.
Your heart is in a jar, locked in a chest beneath my bed.
Grinding down the offal, nothing ever goes to waste
Your tortured form is soon reduced to thick and viscous paste.
The vicious fun is over. I've done my dirty deed.
But how long can I suffer before submitting to my Need?
The urges are unquenchable. Your murder fills my mind.
I've got to recreate it all before I'm out of time.
Peeling skin, cutting flesh, hitting bone and breaking.
There's just no competition, nothing as exhilarating.
I swear, I'll never rest. You can't beat my attitude.
Once again, I'll end up covered in your Splattered Gratitude.
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Your thoughts? _________________
"Victims, aren't we all?" |
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
Joined: 06 Jul 2010 Posts: 17466 Location: Popsicle Mountain
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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The content is a bit extreme for me,
That said, it's still pretty clever, I'd say. _________________
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Toutaku Overlord
Joined: 29 Jun 2010 Posts: 9245 Location: Subreality
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I'm glad you can appreciate what I did with it. xD _________________
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LenLenWearsBlue
Joined: 18 Mar 2011 Posts: 1059 Location: Under your bed.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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Would it be inappropriate to say that this has only existed for about an hour, but I've already on-and-off masturbated to it?
Clearly my priorities are set straight when it comes to appreciating art. |
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Toutaku Overlord
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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..It apparently would, as everyone else felt too awkward to post after that. xD _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
Joined: 06 Jul 2010 Posts: 9695 Location: Shizuoka Town
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Toutaku Overlord
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 11:48 pm Post subject: |
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Haha, glad you liked it.
And as would I. I fully intend to record this, btw. Hope to post it here when I do! _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Toutaku Overlord
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 11:58 pm Post subject: |
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Might try and produce an album, too. >< _________________
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:01 am Post subject: |
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That sounds cool. I know I'd try and buy a copy. Good luck with it if you really do choose to do so, dude. _________________
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Toutaku Overlord
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:08 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, bro!
Gore-themed Industrial seems fun to do. >< _________________
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LenLenWearsBlue
Joined: 18 Mar 2011 Posts: 1059 Location: Under your bed.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:10 am Post subject: |
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Every time I check the replies to this thread, I have to scroll past the lyrics.
The amount of pyjama bottoms I'm going through tonight. . .
But yes, I agree that a music video of some form would be amusing. Something similar in nature to Joe Black's "Sick Love Sick Love Song", I'm thinking. |
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