Glorious Escapism Roleplay

Rabukurafuto · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:57 am Post subject: Dolores

My new short story, "Dolores". A girl recounts her encounter with a ghost from her past and the terrible revelation she has.
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Selrahc · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:30 am Post subject:

Cool, reading it now.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:24 am Post subject:

I read it.

Cute (but kind of creepy) pies are cute (but kind of creepy).
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Selrahc · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:29 am Post subject:

It was creepy, but cute. I think my review pretty much captured the general consensus of the story, but maybe that's just me.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:50 am Post subject:

Thank you for reading.

I wrote this when I imagined what a pie society would be like. I had fun coming with cute things like cake trees, but somehow I wanted to do something darker, having a rotten core to the apple. I would like to explore the World of Eternity in more detail sometime. Maybe Charlotte, Sakurako, and Dolores can all appear again.
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Where others are blind, I am futurely inclined
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:53 am Post subject:

Heh. I'd be interested in seeing more Nymphettes for sure.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:57 am Post subject:

I would suggest a role-play, but I would fear it being just a serious version of your pie role-play.
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Where others are blind, I am futurely inclined
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Selrahc · Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 7:59 am Post subject:

Oh, that should be interesting. The sudden shift of alluding to something of a happy society, then having the reader realize that it's all really wrong on the inside was really refreshing. And Dolores, Sakurako, and Charlotte should appear again, maybe flesh out their lives prior to the tragedy.
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