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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2012 5:35 am Post subject: Adventure of Sorrow Discussion |
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My fanfic of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia. This is just a discussion thread for the story, because due to the fact that my fanfic will have adult content in it, I currently do not know where the thread for the actual story would go.
Story: In a world where monsters that resemble women prey upon human men, a young magician and a group of fellow humans find themselves caught between the lustful hordes of monster girls and the fanatical influence of the Holy Order. In an struggle to stay alive(and possibly preserve their virginity) the group of nomads travel across the land in search for something, anything; a place to call home, or a place of acceptance and reconciliation. But how long can they last before their spirits are crushed by the sad reality of living in a hopeless world that's beyond salvation?
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As always, I am open for accepting character requests from anyone who interested in the story and wants to experience what the setting of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia is like. Of course, this is not required, but nonetheless I would thrilled to have you guys join me in this experience. If you are interested in making a character request, then hears what the standard profile would be.
Name:
Age:
Sex:
Birthday:
Height:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Hometown: (Since the encyclopedia has only a few known locations, you are free to have your character come from any of them, or free to come up with a name for whatever town or kingdom your character is from)
Occupation:
Affiliation: (This is for if you want your character to be a nomad, or a member of the Holy Order, or part of a different group)
Hobbies:
Favorite Foods:
Least Favorite Foods:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Appearance:
Personality:
Background:
Skill:
Monster Girls: (This is optional, but you are free to have a monster girl follow you around, provided that you are aware of the risks of having one with you)
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It might be possible to have your character be a monster girl instead of a human, but it'll be tricky to pull off because a common trait that every monster girl possess is having a strong lustful desire to mate with a human male. _________________
"Yes, I want your love. GIVE IT TO ME!"
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2012 5:56 am Post subject: |
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Thank you, Rab. In that case, I think I'll just put "Rated 18+" next to the title of the story. _________________
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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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The first chapter shall be finished soon. Also, reviewing and comments will be put here. _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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It will be posted here, and on Monster Girl Unlimited. _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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That was a fun beginning and you make the main characters likable enough. I think that they could have handled talking to the mayor more tactfully though, getting him somewhere private to discuss the situation, not blurting out their views in front of the monsters. They're lucky these seem to be friendly monsters, not violent ones.
I look forward to seeing more of these and finding out what happened to the main characters. _________________
Where others are blind, I am futurely inclined
And you too could see, if you was widdle ol' me! |
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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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Rabukurafuto wrote: | That was a fun beginning and you make the main characters likable enough. I think that they could have handled talking to the mayor more tactfully though, getting him somewhere private to discuss the situation, not blurting out their views in front of the monsters. They're lucky these seem to be friendly monsters, not violent ones.
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I'm glad you like it. Adrian and Erien blurting out their views was rather intentional to show how inexperienced they are; new people who were just recruited and given their first mission on day one with no one more experienced to come support them. The monsters being is pretty much meant for that part. Being violent towards humans is more or less a taboo to them. _________________
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