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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:22 am Post subject: |
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Definitely sounds like it should be fun. _________________
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:41 am Post subject: |
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Wow.
I'm definitely excited now. _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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It's too bad you can't work on other stuff.
Still, I look forward to reading the next chapter of this. _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:57 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome. Should be fun then. _________________
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Rabukurafuto Exquisite Sovereign
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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I'm trying something new with Milky Ways. The narration is still third-person, but the tone adjusts itself to whoever the focus is, so with Rangiku and Risty the tone is informal with cruder language sprinkled through like:
Quote: | Rangiku glanced down and found that her tits hanging out of her kosode slightly, her right nipple fully exposed. |
What do you think? _________________
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Phil the Time Wizard Lolimaster 9001
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:32 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds like a good idea to me.
I try and do that with my writing at least to some extent. _________________
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Rahkshi500
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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Sounds good. _________________
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