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 Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 8:16 pm Post subject: Beyond the Grave |
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I'm thinking of doing a Graverobber X Shilo fanfic.
Anyone interested in what I have so far?
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| Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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I'm interested.
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| I wrote: | It had been a long year since the Genetic Opera's curtains had been drawn, and Graverobber's life had returned to the usual bland day to day routine he had become accustomed to. He sold Z. He avoided the Gencorps. He robbed graves. His wallet -not to mention sex life- had somewhat dwindled since Amber had gone clean, and he was nothing but thankful for the latter. Sure, she had become a nice(ish) person, and she was up for almost anything, but the amount of cuts, nips and tucks she'd had made fucking her almost feel clinical. He swore she was going to get vibrating labia one of these days. She probably had already.
Sighing audibly as he walked down Zdunich lane, Graverobber thought back to what he did miss from the old days. Kid. Her innocence was a treasure in this town, and he'd be rather be damned than see it fall apart like everything else worth saving. Unfortunately for him, she'd locked herself in her house for the time being, and he hadn't seen hide nor hair of her for the majority of the past twelve months.
'Poor girl' He though, ducking into a small alley to avoid a searchlight. Spying a potential client, he slipped his face into 'business mode' and swaggered over. The hooker was crouched in a doorway, next to a small pool of vomit tinted with a deep red blood. Blood only got that colour if it was intestinal, she must have been going cold turkey for days. Deciding not to bother with a verbal proposition, he pulled a little glass vial of Zydrate from his pouch, and waved it in front of the girl's emaciated features. She responded by wordlessly moaning, a sound like she was choking on her words. She was too weak to move her arms, but it didn't stop her trying, and they jerked sickeningly like a beached fish gasping for water.
Taking pity on this poor wretch, Graverobber loaded a large amount into his Zydrate gun, and pressed the nose against her inner thigh. There was a spark, but this unfortunate whore wouldn't be receiving surgery. She was too far gone, and the dosage Graverobber had given her was of lethal quantity. This way, she would be spared hours of torment as her stomach rejected itself, and she brought up her own flesh piece by piece. Times like this didn't seem to effect the stoic peddler on the surface, but inside his emotions were a turmoil of negativity. It was him who had most likely delivered that first shot into her veins. It was also him who had just ended a life ruined by the same act. Mercy killing though it was, he knew he would be plagued with it as he slept.
“Sleep now, little one.” He said in a morose tone, yet not without the usual music in his voice. Closing her eyelids with his alabaster fingertips, He rose and turned toward the orange glow of the street light marking the opening of the small back street he had dived down when he sensed the danger approaching.
He missed her. In the ever so short time he had gotten to know Shilo Wallace, she had made such an impact on his eventful little life. At one point, the nameless hooker who was now just a cadaver had a life like Shilo's. She was innocent once. And Graverobber had ended it himself.
Enough. He had finally had enough.
Pulling his Z filled pouch off of his fur-clad shoulder, he threw it harshly aside, and heard the little glass vials break, and his life's work drain away. He was through, and now he only had one thing on his mind. Her. The Kid. His pale features played into a grim maw of determination, and he walked briskly yet quietly through the shadows, aiming to reach the Wallace family home before sunrise. |
Just what I have so far.
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| Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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Quite nice dude. Great start.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 5:28 am Post subject: |
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Thanks! Reckon I'm in character?
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 7:04 am Post subject: |
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Seems right to me.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:14 am Post subject: |
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That was a pleasant song.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:17 am Post subject: |
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Theme from American Beauty.
Combination of my writing and the song made my girlfriend cry. I was so proud I could invoke such catharsis.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:18 am Post subject: |
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Aw, that's nice.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:20 am Post subject: |
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Hmm, have you ever seen American Beauty?
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:29 am Post subject: |
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I don't think so.
It's my brother's favorite movie, and we don't usually agree too much on movies.
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:31 am Post subject: |
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Just to say, it has a Toutaku seal of recommendation. I loved it. :3
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 11:06 am Post subject: |
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I should probably watch it at some point.
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If for nothing else, for the experience.
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