Glorious Escapism Roleplay

Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:35 am Post subject:

Very true.

I think I'll go for it.
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Toutaku · Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:44 am Post subject:

Awesomeness and fillies.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:47 am Post subject:

Write it and I'll decide.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 12:52 am Post subject:

Yeah. I guess it can't be decided if it's a good idea or not until I actually try writing it...

Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:12 pm Post subject:

Canterlot.com is having a Halloween themed writing contest. I wrote my entry yesterday. You can find it here.

The basic idea I had was, what if my three youngest pony OCs met and went on some kind of Halloween adventure? I think the result is pretty fun.

I'd appreciate any feedback I could get, especially since this is a contest, and anything to help me make it better so I could possibly win would be nice...
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:19 pm Post subject:

Does giving you feedback here count?
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:21 pm Post subject:

Sure. I don't expect anyone to actually join the site just to give me feedback.

Just give it here.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:25 pm Post subject:

All right then. Reading now.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:33 pm Post subject:

Awesome!
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:38 pm Post subject:

That was interesting. I expected Hopesong to be a ghost though.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:45 pm Post subject:

You mean, for her costume? Nah, I figured Spirit was more suited to be a ghost.

Any criticism you can think of? It's still a while before the contest deadline, so I'm still free to make it better if I can.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:47 pm Post subject:

No, I mean the twist would be she was a ghost haunting the graveyard.

There is this mistake: Maybe she couldn't relate to the unicorn as much ash she thought...
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:50 pm Post subject:

But that wouldn't really fit in with her existing story... I mean, she's a normal living filly in Darkness and Dawn and in my RPs and all that.... It would just be kind of strange for her to suddenly be a ghost.

Oh, cool. I'll make sure to fix that.
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Rabukurafuto · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:58 pm Post subject:

I don't know your pony characters too well.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:00 pm Post subject:

A good reason I should probably write chapter 3 of Darkness and Dawn pretty soon...
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